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2013年英语专八改错练习关于城市生活环境不容乐观

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Cities can be frightened places. The majority of__1__

the population live in noisy massive tower blocks. The

sense of belonging to a community tends to appear__2__

when you live thirty floors up in a skyscraper. Strange__3__

enough, whereas in the past the inhabitants of one

street all knew each other, nowadays people on the

same floor in tower blocks even say hello to each __4__

other.

Country life, on the other hand, differs from this

kind of isolated existence in that a sense of community

generally keep the inhabitants of a small village togeth- __5__

er. People have the advantage of knowing that there is

always someone to turn to when they need help. So __6__

country life has disadvantages too. For example,

shopping becomes a major problem and for anything

slightly out of the ordinary you have to go for an expe- __7__

dition to the nearest large town. The country has the

advantage of peaceful and quiet, but suffers from the __8__

disadvantages of being cut off. The city has noise and

population which do harm to human health. But one of

their main advantages is that you are at the centre of __9__

things and that life doesn’t come to an end even at ten

at night. Some people have found a compromise be-

tween the two: they expressed their preference for the

quiet life by leaving for the city and moving to the __10__

country within commuting distance of the large city.

参考谜底:

1.把frightened改为frightening

frightened是“受到惊吓的”,剖明心理状况,而frightening暗示“令人害怕的”,暗示事物性质。

2.把appear改为disappear

“当你住在摩天大喷香的三十层里”,可以猜测这里要表达的是归属感的消逝踪,而不是发生归属感。

3.把Strange改为Strangely

Strangely enough,是固定短语,经常用作插入语,意思是“说也奇异,最奇异的是”。

4.在say前面加上don’t

此处说的是,此刻住在统一层楼的人甚至碰头都不打号召。

5.把keep改为keep

in that 指导的句子主语应该是 a sense,故谓语应为单数。本句的意思是,农村糊口与这种阻遏距离孤立的糊口分歧,因为一种归属感把小村里的居平易近联鲜ё仝一路。

6.把so 改为but/yet

上文提到了村子糊口的益处,下文是转折,要用but或者yet。

7.把for改为on

“去远征”应该用go on a expedition,而go for 的意思是“去找,全力获取,拥护”。

8.把peaceful改为peace

of 后面不应该用形容词,所以应该改为peace。这里需要注重的是quiet既是名词又是形容词,不要被迷惑。

9.把their改为its

此处的代词应该指代上文的 the city。

10.删除leaving后面的for,或者把for改为from