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2013年英语专八改错练习关于黑洞的奥秘

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What is a black hole? Well, it is difficult to answer the question,

as the terms we would normally use to describe a scientific phenomenon __1__

are adequate here. Astronomers and scientists think that a black hole is __2__

a region of space which matter has fallen and from which nothing can __3__

escape—not even light. But we can’t see a black hole. A black hole __4__

exerts a strong gravitational pull and yet it has no matter. It is only

space—or thus we think. How can this happen? __5__

The theory is that some stars explode when their density increases

to a particular point; they “collapse” and sometimes a supernova occurs.

The collapse of a star may produce a “White Dwarf” of a “neutronstar”—

a star which matter is so dense that if continually shrinks by the force of __6___

its own gravity. But if the star is very large, this process of shrinking may

be so intense that a black hole results in. Imagine the earth reduced to the __7__

size of a marble, but still having the same masses and a stronger __8__

gravitational pull, and you have some ideas of the force of a black hole. __9__

And no matter near the black hole is sucked in. __10__

参考谜底:

1 将as 改为since或者because。在暗示原因的毗连词中,只有as指导的原因状语从句不能位于主句之后,只能位于句首。

2 将adequate 改为inadequate,或者在are后加not。从逻辑上剖析,因为我们拥有的科学术语“不充沛”,所以才无法回覆这个问题,所以用否认形式。

3 在which 前加into。这是一个定语从句,意思是“黑洞是太空中物质可以失踪进去的处所”,所以定语从句应该为“into which matter has fallen”。

4 将but 改为 so。 上文已提到“连光都无法从黑洞中逃出”,所以我们根柢无法看到黑洞。这里应该是因不美观关系,而不是转折关系。

5 将thus改为so。这句话的意思是“那只是空间—或者我们认为它只是空间”。so做 think 的宾语,thus 只能做连词,不能做宾语。

6 将which 改为whose。这个定语从句的意思是“它是一颗星,其密度很是大,因为自身的引力,它在不竭地缩短”。matter 属于star,所以关系代词应该用whose。

7 去失踪in。result为不及物动词,意为“形成了”,而“result in sth。”意为“导致某结不美观”。

8 将masses 改为mass。mass 可指“大量的物质”,而“the masses”特指“劳动群众”,用在此处不妥。

9 将ideas 改为idea。“idea”在表达“印象”时,为不成数名词,不成以用复数。

10 将no改为any。剖析便知,任何在黑洞四周的工具城市被吸进去。