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2016-10-08
为帮助大家顺利通过2016年的考试,以下是为您提供的2016年12月英语六级作文精讲。
love is like a lamp in darkness
love is the noblest of all the emotions of mankind . it is like a lamp tha t s hines in darknes s and gives people cour age , hope and life .
the pictur e reminds me of o .henry’s famous s hor t story the last leaf , which described a young ar t girl with serious pneumonia, who , while watching the ivy vine was st ripped of its leaves by the cold autumn wind , felt so pessimistic and dist ressed tha t she thought with the fall of the last leaf her life would come to an end .
surprisingly enough , the next morning , she found the last ivy leaf was still there , which again lit her hope of life . the story went on that the last leaf was , in fact , painted by an old ar tist who died of an acute at tack of pneumonia the moment he finished his maste rpiece . this story reveals that love can illuminate a person’s lifelong journey . countles s daily happenings around us may serve as good examples to fur ther expound the topic of the picture .
over seas chinese cont ribute la rge s ums of money to“ project hope”to help children in rural a reas go back to school .
middle school students regula rly help grandpar ents and disabled people with their housework .
college students donate blood pe riodically to hos pitals . somebody with a fatal head injury and with no hope of recovery donated his kidney to a little girl .
war riors in white have saved thousands of sars victims by sacrificing themselves .
the structur e of the chinese char acte r ren“ 人” repr esents people’s mutual love and mutual support . so , peoples hould love and be loved , and i think if everyone gives out a lit tlelove , our world will become a beautiful ea r thly paradise .
结构分析:
· thematic paragraph
* love — noblest emotion
* love — cour age , hope and life
·examples for illust ration
* o .henry’s the last lea f
*“ project hope”
* middle school students
* college students
* somebody’s cont ribution
* war riors in whit e
·concluding pa ragr aph
* people’s mutual love and support
* let the world be filled with love
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