2015年考研英语一大作文真题评析

2015考研英语一大作文：图画作文 手机

【评析】

这篇图画作文是继2013年12月四级之后再一次考察了一个社会热点问题：手机依赖症。越来越多的年轻人，无论是家人之间还是朋友之间，甚至是陌生人之间，过多地依赖手机，要么看信息，要么刷新闻，要么吃饭前先拍照，总之，过度依赖手机却忘记了彼此之间最珍贵的东西，那就是人与人之间的交流(interpersonal communication)。既然是忽略人与人之间的交流，所以定位为负面话题比较容易写作。

无论是手机依赖症还是人与人之间的交流，甚至与考场上这幅类似的漫画，都是我从强化班到冲刺班、预测班强调的。甚至是在预测班讲义上预测七的漫画几乎一样。这对于一部分考生而言是有写作优势的。

题干沿袭一贯要求，依旧是描述图画、阐释意义和给出评论。三段落写作分别如下：

第一段，开篇先交代这样一个社会现象，高科技影响了我们的日常生活。然后描述图画，围绕餐桌前是四个年轻人，各自拿着手机对着食物拍照，但是却彼此不交流。

第二段，这是一个负面话题，可以举例论证，说明人与人之间的交流缺乏，也可以分析其背后的原因。甚至可以引入一个亮点单词，2013年底的新合成词汇phubbing ，手机依赖症。

第三段，综合评析这一不好的现象，甚至对手机这种"双刃剑"的高科技进行评析。最后谈一谈对人与人之间的交流的建议和和谐健康社会的憧憬。

【参考范文】

No one in China can have failed to notice a not uncommon social issue that new technology such as mobile phone has changed our daily life in more than one way. As is vividly shown in the cartoon, around the dinning table sit four youngsters, friends or relatives, shooting photos about the foods and staring at their own phone without communicating with each other. Simple as the picture seems to be, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.

The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly demonstrated an issue in our daily life: the lack of interpersonal communication because of the excessive usage of mobile. I can think of no better examples other than "Phubbing" which is the combination of "phone" and "snubbing". In modern cities exist a group of young people, chatting with friends and relatives only by cellphone and snubbing strangers every day. According to one latest survey conducted by the United Nation, above 90.52% of modern citizens spend most of their daytime on phone, including reading eBooks, scanning e-news, and sending messages, which is so called "Phubbing". Were the situation to continue, we would have to confront with an indifferent society.

Considering every aspect of this phenomenon, we should bear in mind that mobile phone is nothing but a communication tool, which is just a waste of our precious time and money. Thus the public should take practical actions to put an end to this trend. Just a smile or a greeting of "hello" could shorten the distance between people. Only in this way can we make our society more harmonious, healthy and vigorous.

2015年考研英语一大作文真题评析

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